Tangent and Return
Ruby red grapefruit while the snow feathers the world outside, the tang of juice with its history of fire and flowers, Columbus fumbling through salt air and humid daydreams of discovery. Escaping...
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Jaz, A delight to all the senses!! Ruby red grapefruit (i love 'em) snow feathers...it creates a tickle to my id even without the effective enjambment!! fire and flowers sunlit grooves and bright...
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Jaz, Superb! Just grand lines that mingle nature, man and the realities of life . Just perfection! Dee
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J-- O my Beauty, the red ruby sweet citronesque, tang echoing certain oranges which esconce our shared hist'ry, plush and alliterative as fire and flowers, Columbus fumbling as if foreshadowing the...
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This is lovely Jaz, and were it not for the reality of the snow, this could be my island. Regards, Maryse
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An excellent poem as always Jaz:) What a feast of wonderful phrases and description. Just the thing to read on a cold snowy morning:)
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Thank you all for reading and commenting on my poem--I appreciate your time! It's so easy being in the cold winter and daydreaming about a warm climate, but even the snowy landscape can be a thing of...
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Hi Jasmine, The title is great! The sound of it draws the reader in immediately. I love the idea of ruiby-red grapefruit contrasted agains the outdoor's snow feathering. A splendid image and one that...
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Thanks for the read, Wendy. I appreciate that you were able to enter into the poem and allow imagination to generate the images. Your poems are always such great sources of inspiration, also. I enjoy...
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"Boom, the shock of each moment of still being alive"...Richard Burton...ed
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thanks for the read. Burton quote is great...it is amazing to stop and realize that we are still alive!
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